I noticed allot of replies to this chapter and have browsed through them
a little and find allot of comments and stuff of what happened and all that.
I feel though I should comment on how that scene was depicted, quite a few
months back a very close friend of mine was raped and she had to transfer
schools cause it effected her so bad. since then a few thing have bugged me
a little that I've seen or read here and there but this is one of only 2
things since I found out what happened to my friend  that has made me feel
as bad as the day she told me what happened. I never thought I would come
across some thing again that would make my stomach drop and feel like there
a black hole inside it but the section of Akane and Nabiki being assaulted
managed to do that. it may seem odd for me to say this with how it made me
feel but I give credit to you Mark for how well you portrayed that scene
(IMO at least) I hope you keep up the good work and hopefully there won't be
too many more of those kind of scenes though I'll still read your story even
if there is.


~Chan


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