>From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net> >To: "Kenji Murasaki"
<nexuspost@hotmail.com>,<ffml@anifics.com> >Subject: [FFML] Re:
[Spamfic][BoF3][They Come in Threes] >Date: Sun, 23 May 2004 12:01:45 -0400

Meant to do this one. At least the backlog is disappearing. >

That makes two of us...wait, no, mine is still an almighty, intimidating
golem.  In advance, I have to apologize for every single glaring grammar
error.  The writing took about two hours, and I hadn't run it through my
usual spellchecking.  Not the best excuse, but s'truth.  ^^;> >>>Bathtime
Fun>>>>>>It was a rare moment when Momo could enjoy a quiet bath, and she
intended >to >>capitilize on the opportunity. >>>>A moderate "thump" against
the door to her private quarters disbanded the >>expensive thought, however.

That can be combined into one paragraph. 

Noted and fixed. >>>>"I'm busy," she state in a harsh tone. >>>>The door
seeed >>seemed 

fixed. 

  

*snipage of several other fixes* 

Oh gods, his voice... >>Heh. She's lost. 

Then I have done my job. ^__^ >>>>Her brain decided she had performed an
illegal opperation >>operation >>>>>"Don't care," re >>he >>Really needed to
spellcheck this thing. Lots of basic things were missed. 

Yeah.  Now I know why I miss out on all the one-hour challanges.  I'd fail
everytime. 

*snipage* 

Heh. Cute punchline. 

Danke. 

*snipping some more* 

The Woren stared at the lot of them, now very uncomfortable.

"...Canibals," >>he muttered, disgusted. >>Heh. >>>>>"Well, as I said, food

is food." >>>>As if queued, they all turned to look at Garr.  The Guardian
adjusted his >>belt, >>and his eyes took on an evil light. >>>>"Soylent
Green." >>WHAHAHA! I did not see that one coming. Nice job >>Cute humor
oriented spamfics. I approve. >

DB Sommer 

Pleased you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the C&C.  ^^

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