At 04:30 PM 5/26/2004, Chris Nasipak wrote:

At 03:39 PM 5/26/2004 -0600, you wrote:

Mark Shurtleff wrote:

Greetings, folks!

The first draft of Relatively Absent Chapter 9 is now complete and posted
to my story's web site. I am *not* posting it to the FFML because the
contents wanders firmly into 'R' rating territory.

<quizzical look>  So?

I'd qualify that as a bit more than merely R-rated, although not quite an X.

Why do you think I didn't post it directly. ;)

Damn, but that's HARSH, dude.... methinks Nabsy and Akane-chan are gonna
get the shit scared a bit more thoroughly out of them before they get to do
anything fun in this story... I do hope you're not abandoning them as
hopelessly useless...

Nope - the Tendos will be around for quite a while longer.

And as for harsh?  It's a tough world. The only "creative license" I took 
with how the Tokyo cops acted here was the fact that they "did the deed" on 
site instead of waiting to get back to the precinct house. There's a 
*reason* Japan has about a 95% conviction rate from the time of arrest. 


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