you wrote:

The killing itself was a work of art thought

art, thought

Ikari Gendo, laying in an

I think 'lying' would be more appropriate in this case.

expanding pool of blood. The first jacketed hollowpoint slug had struck

just

over the sternum, removing his ability to scream for help, not to mention
severing both the throat, the jugular blood vessels, and the spinal

column.

The second had torn the aorta in half, and again severed the spinal

column.

Both were killing shots - either would leave a victim dying rapidly. The
third shot had been the true surprise - someone had decided he was not to
die a man.

Truly magnificent creatures, his Children.

Hmm. Nice work for a hundred words. I approve.

DB Sommer

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