Sakaki slumped into her room,
you slump or slump against something, don't really slump into it. shuffled
or dragged herself in maybe or something like that if you're being
metaphorical
Good point. I'll fix it for the archival copy.
exhausted. It had been a trying day. First,
that cute kitten had bitten her again--twice--when she tried to pet it.
Got both hands, did it?
Kamineko is an evil vicious beast.
the nurse's office with a nasty cut on her face; Osaka's nose was
swollen
but an ice pack and a bit of sport tape had taken care of that problem.
I can just see her walking around with an ice pack strapped to her face as
well.
Heh!
The
behaviour of Tomo and Kagura during the match had put Kurosawa-sensei on
edge;
Hmm. Since Kagura is generally serious about sports, I'm assuming Tomo did
something to set her off
Probably.
"They're showing ENOUGH spirit already, thank you," Kurosawa had
replied.
Aww, come on, they've only had two casualties so far. :)
ONLY two, eh...?
Yukari peeled the white ball from her face and glowered at the athlete.
A
large red welt had formed in the centre of her face, making her resemble
the
Japanese flag.
Nice picture
I thought so. ^_^
Kurosawa stared back and forth between them. "Now wait just a minute, I
never agreed--"
extra line break
Eep. Good catch.
Kurosawa frowned. "Alright, I guess there's no harm in it--IF both our
classes agree to it. And since you gave me Kagura, there's no chance for
you
to win. Maybe that'll let some of the wind out of you for a while. By
the
way, I'm in the mood for okonomiyaki and yakisoba, so I know just where
your
team will be taking mine for the victory lunch."
extra one here too
I think my mail client is causing those. �_�
Chiyo frowned...then brightened, an idea forming. "I've got a net and a
volleyball! We can practise a little right now!"
practice
British spelling :P
And so, the girls had all gone outside, set up a volleyball net, and
started
practising. Sakaki had stood off to the side, switching in with Chiyo
when
the younger girl got tired, or with Osaka when she managed to intercept
the
ball with her face.
Except 'heading' is supposed to be only in soccar. :)
Heh.
The girls lined up. Red volleyballs appeared at their feet. They spent
several minutes passing the ball back and forth. Sakaki stared hard when
one
of the volleyballs smacked Osaka in the face and burst, splattering her
with
pulp and juice.
Heh. Did see it coming.
^_^
back. "Better. Much better. Not great, but you've definitely graduated
from
tomatoes to..." He rubbed his chin thoughtfully. "Penguins."
Now that, I didn't see coming.
^_^
And Sakaki needs to cut back on the acid.
XD
Heh. Very surreal, like the dreams in the series. Nice work. Always good
to
see Azumanga fics.
Glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
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