Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM] Shades of Darkness - Chapter 2: Twilight of the Age
From: Aaron Nowack
Date: 4/16/2004, 6:07 PM
To: Michael A Chase
CC: ffml@anifics.com


Michael A Chase wrote:

On 04/07/2004 06:46 PM, Aaron Nowack said:
"Usagi," he breathed, his voice full of emotion, and Usagi could see
tears of relief shining in his eyes.  "Thank God!"

I would expect him to later ask pointedly why she didn't stay holed up
somewhere.

Probably close to the next words out of his mouth, but that seemed a
good spot to end the scene.

The other Champion pulled out his small computer.  "Maybe.  It 
depends on how secure their communications are."

Not very, unless Metallia has blocks their access to the Moon Kingdom
computers.

True, once he has time to work out a program to do it.

She shifted slightly through time, and the courtyard around her took
on an unreal quality.  Even its ordinary quiet was more silent when 
she did this.  She was now ever so slightly out of phase with the 
timestream - close enough to observe, but not close enough to be
seen. Thus prepared, she waited, and tried to concentrate on the
coming threat.

Since the dragons know they are hunting her, they should have a counter
for this trick ready.

Hmm... didn't think of that.  I'll give it some thought.

"There is... something here; I can feel it now.  Hidden away, in a
pocket of time." "Can you find it?" Scalae asked. "Time may not be my
domain, but it should be close enough," Loriel said.  "Now, be quiet
while I work."

What's Pluto gots in her pocketses?

Nothing, that outfit doesn't have pockets. :)

Pluto turned to the Fire Dragon, who stood silently watching the 
other Dragon, and pursed her lips.  The Water Dragon would be all but
dead to the world.  One Dragon... she might be able to handle that.
If she could, it would be a great victory.  Not allowing herself to 
hesitate, Pluto stepped back into the time stream.  "Dead -" Fire
burst into being around Pluto.  "Scream," the Fire Dragon finished
helpfully, and Pluto complied.


Nice to see them cooperating with each other, not. :}b

I'm rather fond of that bit. :)


As always, thanks for the comments, and my apologies for taking so long
to reply.

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