I wasn't sure what to think of this at first, but it really drew me
in after a few paragraphs. I think this is an excellent work, despite the
errors as you said. Is there more to it than this?

	You did a very good job with both Maho and Yukino's characters.
There needs to be more Kare Kano fanfiction out there. 

- Denise


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