Andrew Huang wrote:

Excellent piece of work. Had me laughing, at least.

Good. That was its sole intention. 

One nitpick I need to make--takoyaki are not solid balls of
octopus meat. Rather, they're balls of dough with a chunk of octopus in
the middle, grilled up.

Ah ha. I will revise it, then.

 Otherwise, I've got nothing really to recommend to

change in this thing. :)

Great. Thanks for the help. It's appreciated. 

DB Sommer

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