Suggested changes: {before : after}
On 03/22/2004 06:27 AM, Steve Thesken said:
"<You won the village's tournament this year, soundly defeating every
opponent, but it's still her they watch,>" Peh Yin grumbled. "<Shan
Pu's nothing special, not like you, my dear daughter. Yes, she's a
talented warrior. But talent in wielding one's fists and feet
against barbaric outsiders in that brutal spectacle back there does
not equate to leadership potential. Despite your abilities, they
would relegate you to becoming Shan Pu's {advisor : adviser}. Her
{advisor : adviser}!>" She hastily calmed herself.
After the young noblewoman removed her robe and laid it on the bed,
she picked him up and got under {the covers of :} her sheets. She
reached over briefly to shut off her lamp and then rolled back on to
her side, her warm hands snuggling him to her bosom.
Tenchi had met his mother's best friend only a few times over the
years, usually being too busy with his studies and his training. He
had heard his mother say that her friend's husband and son had
returned from {travelling : traveling} overseas several months ago.
He wondered who the girl was. She was heading for Ranma's bedroom.
A girlfriend perhaps? A late night rendezvous?
It was at that moment that she caught sight of herself in the mirror,
after reaching behind herself and undoing the somewhat snug sports
bra, another loaner from Ukyo, which had proven to be a bit too small
for her. She removed it with a soft groan of relief, and then she
saw herself {barechested : bare chested}. A blush covered her cheeks
as she hastily looked away from staring at the sight of her
half-naked body, feeling perverse to be turned on like she was by her
own reflection, seeing it through a boy's perceptions. The
experience reminded her of that first encounter with Ranko, through
the resonator.