On Mar 13, 2004, at 1:26 AM, Angus MacSpon wrote:

Okay, this may require a little explanation at the outset.

This is not a chapter of Sailor Moon 4200 -- not exactly.  (I'm working
on that.)  It's more of an interlude, but of a peculiar kind.

Within the year-4200 world of SM4200, there's a popular anime called
"Queen Serenity and her Senshi".  It's supposedly based on the "real-
life" world of Crystal Tokyo; but there've been hints in the SM4200
story that it's anything but accurate.  For example, in season 1 of the
anime, the senshi were apparently fighting Zentraedi; in season 2, it's
Queen Ryoko and her Space Pirates.  There's a "Sailor Asteroid" in the
storyline somewhere.  And so on.  It's obviously pretty horrific; but a
number of the 4200 characters are big fans of it anyway.

What follows ... is a complete episode from the third season of "Queen
Serenity and her Senshi."  It's in script format because, well, that
really seemed the most appropriate in this case.  And if anything, it's
more horrific than I expected.  Or, to put it another way, writing it
was a blast.  :)

A disclaimer would be out of place within the script, so let me add it
here:  This story is (very loosely) based on "Sailor Moon", which was
created by Naoko Takeuchi, not me.

This script has not been pre-read.  Any comments or criticism would be
gratefully received.

Angus

Not bad. I love all the little references from other shows and such.

However, just for the nitpick factor, a real script leaves out 
ellispses and really, there's too many (beat)s. Other then that, I 
like.

-Steve "Komodo" T.
http://www.geocities.com/studio_pc_hub/



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