At 1:44 AM -0800 13/3/2004, Steve T. wrote:
Not bad. I love all the little references from other shows and such.
However, just for the nitpick factor, a real script leaves out
ellispses and really, there's too many (beat)s. Other then that, I
like.
-Steve "Komodo" T.
http://www.geocities.com/studio_pc_hub/
Yeah, wouldn't surprise me. (I don't have a huge number of scripts to
look at for comparison. ^_^) I was trying to strike a medium between
something that looked like it could be shot, and something that could
be read reasonably easily.
And let's face it, it's not *supposed* to be high-quality. :)
In any case, thanks. I might at least revisit those (beat)s.
Pretty easy to overdo, I suspect.
Cheers,
Angus