Hold on a second, all these people just saw two people they cared about, some 
even being family members, disappear and they cry out in alarm, and all 
Cologne and Happiosai do is say 'Silence!' and 'We trained them.'?  Kinda cold 
blooded if you ask me.  The reaction was perfectly understandable, and those two 
should have been at least a smidge sympathetic rather than demanding and, what 
sounded to me, condenscending.
It would have read a lot better if they had said something to placate them, 
to tell them to relax and listen and explanations would be given.
Shrug, the end just sounded rushed and cruel.




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