Suggested changes: {before : after}
On 03/08/2004 09:25 PM, DB Sommer said:
Ranma and Kachiko were laughing so hard they had to keep leaning on each
other for support. Passersby gave them a wide berth, most thinking the two
were drunk by their incoherent laughter and swaying as they made their way
down the street.
At least the ticket seller's choice worked for them, if inadvertently.
{Kachiko : Kachiko's} first encounter upon awakening was a collision with a splitting
headache. "Oh man, I must have had seriously way too much to drink." She
went to rub her temple, but found her arms pinned to her sides. She was able
to pivot her head just enough to look down and see she was securely bound in
thick links of chain.
No. She did remember. She recalled everything from the moment she ended up
in her house that wasn't her house and the revelation that she had been
plucked from her time to the future and avoided the complete destruction of
her life right before a premature death. She remembered meeting her
'family', Ranma, and that bastard Tarou abducting her. She had been trying
to get to the stairs to avoid the water, that was now starting to flow under
her, {when : then} there had been pain and then she woke up in the park.
So now we know what's happening when she passes out.
Kachiko had enough control to force herself to look up past the tuxedo clad
breasts and to the blood shrouded face of the redhead that now supported her
body. Ranma's eyes were glazed over, as though looking off at some distant
land. Despite the appearance of not knowing where she{, :} was she continued to
move forward and up the stairs.