Nice fic. Really captured the tone of Lain. And for
the second matrix movie for that matter. Unfortunately
the drawn out philosophical discussions were the worst
part of both. You captured that very well, but I think
it's one of those things you should just set free:-)

I wonder now though, why no one has done a Lain/Matrix
crossover? Maybe they have and I haven't seen it? 

Anyway DB pretty much covered all my other problems
with the fic. I'll just say kudos on writing a Lain
fic that stayed true to the original so well and leave
it at that.


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you,
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