METROPOLITAN BLUES

01: CUT

Very nice :)  You handled the POV changes quite well, I 
think.

I thought Mackie's section was particularly disturbing. That 
boy has some major problems.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of this series.


Regards,
Jeanne Hedge

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