Subject: [FFML] Re: [teaser][R1/2] The Things We Wish For... Chapter 13 Prologue
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 2/6/2004, 8:30 AM
To: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>



Michael A Chase wrote:


On 02/02/2004 06:58 PM, DB Sommer wrote:

used the corrections.

It was not until the next day, after a restless night with little 
sleep, that Kachiko considered ripping Ranma's lips off his mouth for
causing her such grief. It was curious, and more than a little 
annoying. All it had taken was him saying a single compliment and 
turning her into a downward spiral of uncertainty and confusion. It 
didn't make sense. Guys had called her cute before. Lots of them, and
some of them had been cute too. Kunou complimented her continuiously
and in much more flowery language when he was in her presence, and
on a basis strictly of looks, he was more handsome than Ranma (though
not by much). So why was it when Ranma said something as simple as 
calling her 'cute' it made her feel warm inside?

It might be worthwhile for her to compare notes with Ukyou.

Except she wouldn't trust Ukyou long enough to listen to her. :)


about Kachiko. While she enjoyed the flattery, it wasn't as though it
 was exclusively meant for her, which made it less important. While 
she felt appreciated, his words hadn't made her heart flutter or 
cheeks warm the way Ranma's had.

It sounds like she doesn't realize that Kunou's pig-tailed girl is
Ranma.  She knows about Ramna's curse, doesn't she realize that Kunou
still hasn't caught on?

Not yet. More on that later in the chapter.


Kachiko wondered if there were any other girls that found Ranma as 
alluring and annoying at the same time as she did.

I guess you could safely put an upper bound at the number of girls who 
have seen him.  You might be able limit the number of annoyed girls to 
those who have actually met him.

Heh. He's a memorable person in any case. 

Thanks.

DB Sommer

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