On Thu, 2004-01-29 at 20:13, Scott Jamison wrote:

In summary, not really a very interesting chapter; way too much time
spent on Eiko being superior and Ranma upgrading.  Not nearly enough
time spent on consequences.

Hey, Scott!

Hate to be a grumpy bastitch, but sometimes a writer needs to put in
some setup.  Consequences are likely coming; be patient and give the man
time to develop them.  

-- Nick



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