Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][C&C] [Fanfic][Ranma/SM] Relatively Absent: Chapter 7 (part 1 of 2)
From: Jay F Kominek
Date: 1/30/2004, 1:39 AM
To: ffml@anifics.com


On Thu, Jan 29, 2004 at 07:49:44PM -0500, Roehl Sybing wrote:
"Eiko?"

{{Yes, Ranma?}}

"If that's what you think of as 'slightly painful', I'm not sure I
really want to know what you consider to be 'really hurts'."

I checked twice, and I still might not have seen it, but Eiko did not say
the words "slightly painful."  Just chop off the quotes or another
word/phrase that was said.  Don't use single quotes for "really hurts"
either.  That is Ranma saying it.

"slightly painful" was used in chapter 6.

Also, I think the quotes around Ranma's speech there is just fine. I
take it to mean that for those two words, Ranma did his best to match
the speaking style/cadence/marmoset of Eiko, in an attempt to mock.
In this case, I expect that Ranma dropped into a monotone for it, as
that is how I hear Eiko's lines in my head as I read them. But thats
just me.

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