Well, atleast the author posted a disclaimer aswell. Not that I've read the
disclaimer. Heck, I read more of the story! 3 whole lines!

My recommendation (if you're using Windoze that is)? ALT-F4, save document?
No.

If I do have to give pointers, I'd recommend starting with a plot, sticking
to it, and trying to make it believable (aw heck, who am I kidding? I'm
talking about making a believable erotic story with fictional characters.
Not that it can't be done, but hey ;) ...)

Neko-

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