Eventually she
stumbled upon a videotape her father had tucked away in a small box

under

his bed. It had a title that sounded French, 'Deluxe Menage a Trios,'.

Should be "sounded French, 'Deluxe Menage a Trois.'"

Actually, it should REALLY be...

It had a title that sounded French: "Deluxe Menage a Trois."

She then began
crying at the top of her lungs, and ran out of the room at top speed.

Poor Kaorin, always getting the short end of the stick.

...you might want to rephrase that, considering Kimura-sensei happens to
have a particular jones for her... :P

--------------------------------------
The Eternal Lost Lurker
www.lurkerdrome.com



             .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List----.
             | Administrators - ffml-admins@anifics.com |
             | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@anifics.com |
             |     Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject     |
             `---- http://ffml.anifics.com/faq.txt -----'