--- Denise Cameron <elenaholman@cavesofnarshe.com> skrev: > 

... yes, I'm an idiot. This was the message right underneath The
P-Chan 
Letters. Ah well.

Perfectly understandable. I sent out "Finding" minutes or so before
"The P-chan letters", yet it seemed to arrive later, at least on my
end.
One reader suggested that I should have included "1 of 2" and "2 of 2"
in each subject line. I think that's a good idea.

Ryoga Hibiki could never determine if the dreams which had begun to
plague him that summer had a natural origin or not. After all, when
magic in an escapable part of your life, you can't just rule out a

- magic is an, unless I'm reading this wrong.

Nope, you're absolutely right and I was wrong. Thanks. 

"I, um, I used to be in love with her," he mumbled. He heard her

gasp.

"She kissed me, once, and I fell in love with her," he said,

kicking at

a pebble on the ground. "Only, she didn't know it was me..."

- Poor Akari. I like this paragraph.

Glad to hear it. :)

- I really like this, I wish I had read it before the P-Chan Letters,
but it 
doesn't matter too much, I guess. Well written, and I enjoyed it
despite the 
fact that I don't like Akari.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to tell me!
(I don't *dislike* Akari, myself, but I do think she can be rather hard
to write, since she's not too well-rounded a character.)

Cheers,

Elin


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