I meant to read and comment on this quite a while ago >_>. Anyway...

        `Rei!' Ikari-shirei says, pulling me from the still too-warm
LCL.  I

- Ikari-shirei? I don't know that one. Is it sort of like a combination 
between sama and sempei?

        Another nurse comes, and they help me into a modified plugsuit.
 I
wonder if LCL is good for wounds.  A couple orderlies transfer me to a

- Probably should be "a couple of orderlies"


- That was interesting, thanks for sending it out. You may want to go over 
it again and smooth out a few parts, but all in all, a nice read and an 
interesting idea. Sorry that I don't have much more to say then that.



-I had my nose in a book all the time when I was 14, too ^-^

- Denise



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