Not a bad idea.  Not a bad idea at all.  Remember, this is done from my own
point of view.  The basic guidlines are set.  Think of Youma as a rampaging
grizzy/kodiak bear with some regeneration abilities and two hearts for how
much damage it takes to put one down.  The generals are too busy behind the
lines to come forward except for Japan, but if you want to have a higher up
come forward, just let me know.  They're attacking the whole world at this
point, concentrated a bit around Japan.  China gets hit more often than the
USA, Australia gets hit more too.  Hmmm, that'd be interesting for somebody
to write about.  Europe probably gets hit a little less.  Japan is, for
whatever reason, while hit fairly often, it's all concentrated enough for
the senshi to take care of it.  The Japanese government is in denial.  While
I said that the USA is now basically a big militia, remember, there can be
exceptions to this.  The USA is a big place.

You have my official permission to expand on this world.

Firethorn



-----Original Message-----
From: Steve T. [mailto:mixednutspress@earthlink.net]
Sent: Thursday, January 08, 2004 4:05 AM
To: LT MCHORNEY
Cc: 'ffml@anifics.com'; 'Firethorn'
Subject: Re: [FFML] Re: Youmas Attack the United States.



On Jan 8, 2004, at 1:44 AM, LT MCHORNEY wrote:



Interesting story, although it reads more like an overview or a news report
than a story itself. It would make a good prologue/teaser to a story about
a Special Forces team or three invading Beryl's universe. Especially if
they end up there the same time that Sailor Moon and company launched their
assault.

One other note, You wrote that bases were going to Charlie and that the
Western US bases were going to Delta. Many of the people I know (those that
aren't in the same line of work at least) wouldn't know what was meant by
'Charlie' and 'Delta.' You might want to amend it to say 'Force Protection
Condition Charily and Delta. While it doesn't go into details about what
the different measures are, it's a bit more descriptive about what you're
talking about.


Actually, I see another "Virus" here. Humanity is going to eventually figure
out how to get to where the youmas come from. That means an attack with
different units. Now, we know the Senshi make it to Beryl. That part of the
story's been told and is an intrinsical part of the Sailor Moon mythos.

But what about the units and the soldiers. What's their story?

-Steve "Komodo" T.
http://www.geocities.com/studio_pc_hub/


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