Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][SM] Shades of Darkness Prologue & Chapter 1
From: Aaron Nowack
Date: 1/1/2004, 9:54 PM
To: Michael A Chase
CC: ffml@anifics.com




Michael A Chase wrote:
Shades of Gray can be found at
http://studentweb.tulane.edu/~anowack/sogr/ for the moment.


My spelcheker wants to change anoack to wackos.  Is that significant? :}b


Quite possibly.  :)

       "I cannot break Serenity's hold on you entirely, General, not
for long. I have granted you some measure of freedom.  Be grateful for
that."


An interesting hidden player. Kyrien or someone else?  If it is truely
a voice that Jadite wouldn't recognize, perhaps it's an old opponent
of Metallias from the old days.

Heading in the right direction, but not quite there yet.

But then, it isn't supposed to be clear who the hidden voice is just yet. :)

       And on distant Pluto, a figure stood on a hill over the ruins of
Castle Charon, the tiny sun to its back.  A smile appeared on its face
as it watched Sailor Pluto pick her way through those ruins, searching
in vain for either of her two charges.  "Finally."  The word hung in the
air.  "At last.  It begins."

Possibly the same person as was talking to Jadite.


Possibly.  Or posibly not.

I'm wondering why unsealing the fleet wasn't the first thing they did
after the Champions swore their oath to Usagi; there must be a lot of
magic users there.  They are going to need all the help they can get
and then some.


With the Great Seal destroyed, they aren't able to "find" the fleet to
unseal it.  I could have sworn that got mentioned in the Shades of Gray
epilogue, but upon looking I discovered that it isn't.

So, I'll work it into Meno and Ami's conversation in the prologue.

Good catch, and as always, my thanks.

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