Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fanfic][R1/2] Life on the Inside Part A (A Quantum Destinies Side story
From: The Wanderer
Date: 12/12/2003, 7:31 PM
To: FFML


DB Sommer wrote:

Michael A Chase wrote:

New fighters to the Imperial Arena always arrived on Wednesday,
since their last fight was usually the Friday before in the Hong
Kong Arena, and they needed time to rest and recover before
packing and heading to Japan and the crown jewel of the Empire's
entertainment industry, The Tokyo Imperial Arena, a.k.a., The
Battledome.

I usually see that as AKA.

will change.

Regardless, the trailing comma is inappropriate.

Instantly, Tarou stopped fighting and the crowd began to disperse
at a signal that was universally known among the fighters.  One
of the Director's {pet : pets} (in every sense of the word)
enforcers,

I think it's fine as is because 'enforcers' is the plural here. pets
enforcers doesn't sound right.

Correct - "pet" is an adjective in this context; the original usage was
correct.


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