Michael A Chase wrote:

And also Angcobra is now storing some of my older fics, at
http://dbsommer.web1000.com/dbsommer.html

He's moved your stories to
http://www.hostultra.com/~AngCobraFics/dbsommer.html

Oops. I must have used an older 'opening'

New fighters to the Imperial Arena always arrived on Wednesday, since
their last fight was usually the Friday before in the Hong Kong Arena,
and they needed time to rest and recover before packing and heading to
Japan and the crown jewel of the Empire's entertainment industry, The
Tokyo Imperial Arena, a.k.a., The Battledome.

I usually see that as AKA.

will change.

 >> > "The blonde girl is '{Park Ji-hyun : Ji-hyun Park}."  Running Deer

pointed to a smaller girl.

I would expect Park to be her family name and you seem to be using
English order for names.

Okay. Was uncertain of how that worked to be honest.

The Amazon's musings were interrupted as a girl poked her head into the
locker room and shouted, "There's a fight in the weight room!  Tarou's
working over the new Impie!"

You use Impy further down, but I like Impie better.

Will go with what you suggest.

Chiang elbowed Shampoo in the ribs.  "I guess we know why she was so
insistent you're not interested in Kumon, eh?

"Shampoo knew all the time," the Amazon said with an uncomfortable
laugh.

Uh, yeah.

What? You don't believe her? :)

Instantly, Tarou stopped fighting and the crowd began to disperse at a
signal that was universally known among the fighters.  One of the
Director's {pet : pets} (in every sense of the word) enforcers,

I think it's fine as is because 'enforcers' is the plural here. pets
enforcers doesn't sound right.

room, his entourage congratulating him on "Putting that {Impy : Impie}
piece of shit in his place."  Shampoo noted that in spite of accepting
the accolades of the others, he still shot Ryu a look even more evil
than usual.  It appeared Tarou was blaming the Impie for his dressing
down.  That was going to be even more trouble than usual.

Apparently Park didn't take Shampoo's warning.

Nope. Reason will become evident later.

And if Shampoo tried to comfort him and he reacted the way Ryu had,

she'd be quick to drop him in a heartbeat.  She wouldn't make a fool
out of herself setting her sights on a guy that was obviously not
interested in her.

So when does Ranma show up so she can fall for him?

Yes, she is just begging to have fate bitch slap her, isn't she?

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