Email:  sandborn@kc.rr.com


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Richard Lawson" <nouma@msn.com>
To: "Denise Cameron" <elenaholman@cavesofnarshe.com>; <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2003 4:55 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ramna][Post Anime/Manga][Spoilers] The Will of the
Father, Chapter 1

 Mr. Kuonji was a middle-aged man, though he still
had the youthful posture and strength that came with
being a martial artist since he was a child.

Now you're suffering from what I call Sandborn-itis.  =)  Greg Sandborn

has

a wonderful series called Nabiki: New Horizons that starts in the worst
possible manner - paragraph after paragraph of dull description, giving us
endless background in one huge info dump.  You're suffering from much of

the

same here - there is some important information but it needs to presented

a

bit better.  As a reader it's quite dull to plow through all this stuff to
get to the "good parts".

    I have a disease named after me?  Could be worse, I suppose, but I FIXED
THAT!
    See the current version at:   http://home.kc.rr.com/sandborn

    (Sandborn-itis?  Sounds fatal.  @_@ )

    - Greg




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