It's cute, the profanity fit very well with how Setsuna is probably
feeling, and the mental imagery of the multiple DeLoreans was not only
hilarious, but *very* surreal --up there with Monsters Inc.'s door-chase
sequence and Porco Rosso's fighterplane paradise. If it weren't a silly
shortfic, I'd really suggest you expanded on the amazing spectacle of
all the gates surging forth from fire and lightning, while various
silver cars shrieked down infinity.

..however!

It is a silly fic, and as such it BEGS to deal with a certain
spiky-haired, silent protagonist and a memorable stadium-sized urchin.
If anyone could get Magus and Mr. Big Fire to cower and huddle in a
corner, it'd be Setsuna.


Jorge A. Pratt
jorgepratt@prodigy.net.mx
terbril@rocketmail.com



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