I can't believe I'm actually sending in a comment in who knows how long...I 
guess it's time for me to stop being a lurker!

Not being privy to the TOP universe, I took a short detour to read it first 
before jumping into 'Time'. Reading it first did help out a lot. Since 
mostly everyone else said what I wanted to say, particularly Krista, I 
wanted to chime in saying that it is a good story. The depressed and angsty 
parts didn't bother me much--it showed me what Ranma was going through.

Only a couple of points stand out to me. I would like to read a little more 
interaction between Ranma and Maaya after Ranma returns to his sophomore 
year. I was trying to reconcile how he could be standoffish most of the 
time he spent with her, then suddenly she is his closest friend at the end 
of the story.

It also appears that at some point in the future, Ranma returns to being a 
guy. If you plan any sequels, I would love to see how this happen and how 
he deals with that, especially since he has a family and all. And I'm 
equally surprised to learn that Maaya doesn't learn about Ranma's curse 
until years later.

Other than that, it was a good story. Good to see you up and about again. 
Looking forward to your website!

LaShawn
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Velma: There's a very logical explanation for all of this.
Shaggy: Like, tell me!
Velma: The place is haunted!
Shaggy: Thanks a lot.
                                 --a scene from Scooby Doo

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