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On Sun, 23 Nov 2003 20:38:29 -0500 LSMcGill <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:

"But... but that girl is walking down the street naked!  And she's
covered in hand prints!"

"If you want to survive around here kid, you ignore that.  Pretend
she's just wearing a school uniform."

If she's covered in hand prints, does that mean she's not really naked?

Summer uniform of course.  Which school?

Urd dimly remembered _that_ at least.  She really should have
remembered the Jotun {Dwarves : Dwarves'} ale packed a huge wallop.
"Sorry."

"You forgot your dress, Urd."  Mara said again, handing her the article
in question.  "You walked out of the room naked!"

Urd took the dress and gave Mara a long look.  "Ummm....  Mara?  I hate
to say this, but so did you."

Nice touch.

Zhu Shu gave the red-head a look.  "Talismans belong to Shendu.  Demon
dragon who seek to return from spirit realm.  Long ago, Clan Dragon's
greatest fighter take talismans and turn Shendu to statue.  If Valmont
recovers talisman, can bring Shendu back to life.  Section {thirteen :
Thirteen} mean to make sure does not happen."

Akane stared.  "Are you telling me you fought a demon {on : in} Hong
Kong?"

Several minutes later, Shan Pu finally understood the reference.

Then it was Ranma's turn?

"I am dead, {mistress : Mistress}.  I am alive only because you do not
end my existence."

"You {cannot mistress : cannot, Mistress}.  My heart belongs to Shan
Pu.  Only my body can be yours.  Besides, you have your own goddess."

She'd shown up, and sure enough, he was nowhere to be seen, though the
Malted's had the reservations waiting.  She had been served impeccably,
enjoying the late afternoon breeze on the restraint's patio, and
wondering about the closed down building across the street.

Was Malted's supposed to be maitre'd?

"You're finally getting a {gps : GPS} installed in your head?  And
you're going to finally spend time with me on a date?"

Didn't he have a GPS receiver in his hummer?  Darn thing didn't work on
Barsoom.

Several minutes and a change later, Tao-Ching sat back down, smiling at
the way Nabiki's ears were quivering at attention even
{thought : though : though she thought} she was looking nonchalant.

Behind her, the boulder let out a chuckle and a rumble that sounded
like "My silky darlings."  The rock started to shake as the glowing
fissures on it's surface grew wider.

It will be interesting to see how strong Happosai is relative to the
other characters.

--
Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.


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