[FFML] (C&C)Re: Need help

I really hate to spam ffml, but I need help. There a Ranma story that I'm
looking for. The story is about Ranma meeting up with Salior Moon group at

compation. They all know Ranma from different part of thier live. It part

of

other oneshot story. Think the story is call Life and Time. If any1 know
where i could find it please send a private reply.
                                                               THX ALL



There are many problems with the above paragraph that need to be addressed.

#1: "ffml" -- This should be capitalised, as it is an acronym referring to a
proper noun.

#2: You're missing a "the" in the first sentence.

#3: You're missing a "the" in the third sentence.

#4: "competition" is misspelled, assuming that's the word you intend to use.

#5: "their" is misspelled.

#6: "live" should be "lives", as that is the plural form of "life", and we
are talking about lives plural here.

#7: "It part" makes no sense. This should be "It's part".

#8: "of other oneshot" is also nonsensical. Try using "another", or "a", or
more appropriately, "a series of other oneshots". Which rather negates the
concept of it being a oneshot, but there you have it.

#9: "is call" is incorrect verb usage. Should be "is called".

#10: "anyone" is misspelled. Words cannot be spelled using numerals.

#11: "know"--incorrect verb usage; should be "knows"

#12: "I" should be capitalised.

#13: "Thanks" is misspelled.

#14: The closing has no punctuation and also is in all caps, which is
inappropriate.

Incidentally...you didn't even bother trying to FIND this story yourself
before you posted the request. I did a quick Google search using "ranma life
times sailor" as the key words.

http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Ginza/4537/index2.html

That was the very first result. There's your fic.

Try not being too lazy to look for yourself next time, okay? The FFML FAQ
clearly states laziness isn't a good reason to spam the list with a fic
request. :P


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