"Still, discretion is recommended.  If the Pattern Silvers knew what we had

found in the Gobi, it might cause problems," Stillwater cautioned.

"It's not what we found. It's what we're planning to do with it," Jacob

replied with distaste.

"That issue has already been decided," Stillwater stated, ending the

discussion.

   Damn, this is a rather frightening bit.

   Overall I get the feeling that things are going to get even darker as the
fic goes on, I just hope the end will be worth the read. The writing is good,
and the story interesting thus far, but I have a rather wary feeling about
continuing on. Even so I'll keep reading. :)

   About the only thing that bothered me continuity wise was the beginning.
I'll grant it's been a little while since I've ready chapter four, but Ranma's
hostility at the beginning of this chapter comes at me rather abruptly,
without enough time for said transition.

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Druid
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