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From: <Aleh@aol.com>
To: <thermopyle@tds.net>
Cc: <FFML@anifics.com>
Sent: Tuesday, November 18, 2003 3:18 PM
Subject: Re: [FFML] Re: [Sailor Moon] [AU] Alternate Views 01
In a message dated 11/18/2003 3:53:51 PM Eastern Standard Time,
thermopyle@tds.net writes:
Disregarding the first part, you might want to
remember
the
*REASON* Tuxedo Mask showed up at those first battles --
somehow, I
don't think they
apply here.
Because Usagi was in danger, no? She's certainly not here--yet
the
backstory hinted at indicates that she was earlier, and apparently
he
never showed up those times. That needs to be addressed.
And because they share a psychic connection, in part as a
result of
their love. In other words, he could sense that she was in danger.
As in this,
Endymion's love is obviously one-sided, I doubt the connection is
there.
Right--but she dismissed the attack as pathetic, and judging from her
experience at this point, I believe she'd know whether it was or not.
I can't believe that she's been fighting for four years and this is
the most danger she's been in, if that's what made Tuxedo Mask show
up. Why would he sense that she is in danger now yet never show up
when she was starting out? Tuxedo Mask's intervention here makes it
seem as though the previous four years of battles never happened.
Based on the newspaper name that he has, it's clear that Tuxedo Mask
has been around for a while and located in Japan--a normal newspaper
wouldn't cover him if he were outside the country, I think. Yet he
never jumped to Usagi's rescue. This is part of the time lapse
problem I'm having with the story.
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