--- Angus MacSpon <macspon@ihug.co.nz> wrote:

Your suggestion is better grammar, but the version
as written
fits Ranma's speech patterns better (or at least his
speech
patterns as we've been seeing them in this story).

I would believe that given Ranma's new determination
to study (as egged on by Star), his/her speech
patterns will start to improve.  And as Naoko, Ranma
would be tempted to change her speech patterns to add
an extra element of disguise.

I do agree with all your other comments.  :)

Thank ye.

Fred

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