At 11:02 PM 11/5/2003 -0500, you wrote:

This is a short story.  I know, hard to believe I wrote an actual short
story, but it is, really.  It also eventually turns R-rated, so be
forewarned.

Displaced
An Utena Fanfic

By John Biles

Very nice.  I didn't see any obvious technical errors, and I thought the 
story progressed rather smoothly.  The setup at the dance felt a bit long 
until the all the expositions fell into place around Juri and Miki.  A nice 
WAFFy little character driven piece that I feel follows the theme and 
characters of the show very well.  I enjoy seeing fics which leave 
Ranma/DBZ/SM behind as much as I like the fics which include them. So this 
one was very welcome.

Good enough work to drag me out of the black hole of Lurkerdom at 
least.  And I don't post often.   |#_#l"



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