you wrote:

[Foreward] Sorry about this change in plans, but as I did the
revisions, I realized that I was only making grammar corrections for
the most part, and that my itch to write new material was too much and
I had to scratch it.  So for the moment the revisions are ending and
I'll be going forward with new stuff on this.  All the older chapters
are on the webpage if you need to catch up.

Caught up.  I sent my comments directly to you.

Thanks. They were appreciated. I'll get back to you on them, though maybe
not until next week. Hitting the old Nekocon for the weekend.

 > every time Yuri had seen her.  She wouldn't have been surprised if the

bounty hunter took a shower with a cake of explosive soap on hand and
acid concealed in her shampoo.

Well.  She still has the rat bar.  I'm sure it counts as a lethal weapon
in some jurisdictions.  Even with the original contents.

Heh.

"Seal's popped somewhere and the place is decompressing.  I've felt it
before."  Usually on space stations she and Kei had visited, right
before the people they were pursuing caused said decompression.

Before or after?  I imagine some times they started the decompression
too.  But... it's not their fault!

It's all in your POV. They think destuction is always unavoidable.

"I mean we'll get off the station before Lance gets to my ship."

I guess that's another definition of 'get lucky'.

It's all in your POV. ^_^

Yuri ignored the whining about Killgore and Cross already waiting on
the dock for them.  Instead she opted to stare out the viewport as the
space station already began lurching in its death throes.  That seemed
to be happening a lot lately.  At least they hadn't lost any planets on
this mission.

There was that terraforming station though.

Only a station, not an entire planet. :)

Yuri's earlier amusement at Kei's being sent off to the middle of
nowhere turned into resentment.  It wasn't fair that Kei could loaf
around on her ass while Yuri was stuck doing all the dirty work.

Which makes me wonder what sort of pot Kei's dropped into.

You'll find out next chapter.

Thanks for all the help. It's appreciated.


DB Sommer

-- 
Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.


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