Michael A Chase wrote:
Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Mon, 20 Oct 2003 23:46:55 -0500 Aaron Nowack <anowack@tulane.edu>
wrote:
"The rumors," Deinas began, then shook his head and turned to
Janus. "I know Phoebe. We grew up in the same tribe." He paused,
shaking his head a second time. "I knew she was an orphan of the
succession war like me, but this...." He trailed off, glancing down
at the floor below, where the Queen was conferring with her
{advisors : advisers}, among them the present Senshi Mars. After a
few moments, it appeared a decision had been reached, and Phoebe
was brought forward to be tested.
Disagree. The original form was at least equally correct.
She watched dispassionately as the others pleaded for an
explanation. She could not speak, she could only gather the energy
to {fulfil : fulfill} her purpose. She knew that they would not
strike first, so she could wait, and prepare the strongest attack
possible.
Again, the original spelling is also valid.