On Sat, 1 Nov 2003, Rene A Modesto wrote:

The other point I wanted to raise about the story was that Harry would not
have necessarily been killed by the Orbo bullets - this is stated in the WHR
series that STNJ uses 'different methods' from their European counterparts
that don't require the killing of Craft users.

oh Harry's not dead.. exactly.

What happens after the point of capture is a different matter. :3

All in all, good tale.   But yes, _Alvada Kadavera_ is a bit over the top.
Sort of like Tenchi using the Light Hawk wings to stop a pickpocket.  Maybe
_Petrificus Totallus_ would have been better (she uses it on Neville in the
first movie).

[ Rene ]

I was going for the Scared/Desperate Hermione who hasn't slept in days
approach..
well and maybe cheap shock value :)

 perhaps I should tone it down a tad there.


thanks

 Neil



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