Since this is a spamfic, I'll give it a quick once over:
Somewhat Halloween-themed,
*Sniff* Don't remind me. I had plans for completing my long unfinished
Halloween fic called "Purr" this year. Now I have to wait until next year.
itPINK HAIR
A Ranma 1/2 mystery fusion
A loud commotion outside the front door drew the attention of the
Tendo family as they sat around the dining room table discussing their
immediate future.
Hmm. That certainly runs on. Might want to break it down into two sentences.
"Ah!" Soun exclaimed joyfully. "That must be them
now!"
recommend dropping 'now.' Seems unncessary, even if it's being spoken.
"For your sake, Ranma had better be incredibly handsome, smart, and
sexy," said Nabiki
'threatened Nabiki' sound better to me, since it basically is a threat
coming from her. :)
The rest of the family got up and ran to the foyer, where the
strangest sight of their lives greeted them. Nabiki cringed on the far
side of the room, unable to take her eyes off the spectacle just outside
the open doorway. The giant panda waving a sign that read [HELP!] in
hastily scribbled letters was weird enough, but the creature that held
the panda helpless in its voluminous locks was even stranger....
Guide: Oh no, Mr. Customer fall into Spring of Drowned Inhuman. Now whoever
fall into spring become Medusa from the series.
^_^
"HA! FOOL! DO YOU THINK TARO CAN BE STOPPED BY MERE HAIR?"
Tarou pulled out a can of 'Nair'. "This will take care of you!" he shouted.
*************************************************
"Ah, that's right!" announced Genma, slamming his fist into his palm
triumphantly. "The Spring of Drowned Monomakia!"
RANMA 1/2 PINK HAIR: HERE'S RYUNMA!
Acknowledgements:
Ranma 1/2 and all related characters are the creation of Rumiko
Takahashi.
Brigadoon is the creation of Nozomi Watase.
Hmm. Didn't get far enough into that to pick up the reference. Interesting
enough.
DB Sommer
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