Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM] Sailor Moon Z #23
From: John Biles
Date: 10/9/2003, 4:05 AM
To: Jim Miller
CC: Fan Fiction Mailing List <ffml@anifics.com>




On Wed, 8 Oct 2003, Jim Miller wrote:

--On 9/30/2003 11:08 PM -0400 John Biles wrote:


Good chapter, I enjoyed it.  I was quite surprised by 'Sailors pop in to
Dark Kingdom, Sailors popped out.  End of battle.' :-)

Heh :)



	"I think Libra knew too much," Leo said.  "But I don't have proof.
I just know that I don't trust Scorpio and someone has to be responsible."
He frowned.  "But all I have is suspicions.  However, if we can get the
Orb of Stars, then we will be in a position of strength."

'But all I have _are_ suspicions' perhaps?

Doh!


	"I've been confiscating coal from the mortals, sir.  Sapphire
finds it quite useful also.  Fascinating stuff.  Apparently, the humans
make it by highly compacting dead animals and plants into little black
chunks which resemble rock.  Then they burn it to get energy.
Unfortunately, the energy is no longer suitable for sustaining life, but
it is very useful for producing heat."

<snicker>


Heh :0



	"The Star Kingdom fell, damning the five kingdoms and all the
others, because the royal family had become lazy weaklings, who partied
their way to disaster," Augur said.  "The Senshi have failed.  Only the
Zodiac can defend the Solar System now, and they can't do their jobs while
you stand in the way."

Naru's cat is the one that's been ratting them out?  Geez, that sucks.  Is
it deliberate that most of the people associated with astrology/the Star
Kingdom in SMZ are really into betrayal?


It's pretty easy to justify anything if you believe too much that the
Stars rule all and tell you what to do...



	One by one, the Zodiac shuffled into their positions in the Great
Hall of the Zodiac.  The long awaited Rite of Ascension was at hand.  Some
of them awaited it with anticipation.  Others feared what might come of
it.  But all knew it was the end of one era, and the beginning of another.
Nothing could be the same again, for them, one way or another.

Ascension/Ascendancy/Ascendant is already established as the current
dominant Zodiac member.  A different term than 'Rite of Ascension' might be
better if it's not deliberately the same.


Hmm, good point.



And the next COAEG is currently being preread, so it should be out soon.
:)



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