DB Sommer wrote:

- - - - - - - - - -
"My first time with him?" Kitsune told the eagerly-
listening studio audience with a wink and a smile.  "It
was the day of his first divorce from... let's call
her 'Ranu'.
   

Heh. already this has potential.

(blushes) Why, thank you!

A bunch of us had been celebrating in an
 

onsen.  See, the others had all wanted to marry him,
and now they had another shot.  Well, we'd been there
for a bit, and maybe we'd had a bit too much to drink,
you know how that goes.  And then in he walks,
strutting that macho strut and giving us that dazzling
smile of his.  I went all weak in the knees.  He took
all five of us right then and there, ignoring our
feeble pleas and protests.  We had no chance to resist
him."
   

Yeah, Seta was that with the girls.

Heh.  Isn't he, just.

And not ripping their leaves off in the process?
 

Well, she did :), but she also managed to grab their arms.

"I can't believe you," Naru huffed to Kanako.
"Disguising yourself as me and sneaking into bed with
Keitaro.  Don't you have any shame at all?"

"None," Kanako replied airily.
   

Naru: Why, you'd probably be so shameless as to disguise yourself as Keitaro
and ravage me.

Kanako: Not really.

Naru: Perhaps you didn't hear me, I said you would probably be so shameless
as to disguise yourself as Keitaro and ravage me. Wink, wink. Nudge, nudge.

Kanako: Ohhhh. I see. Well, I guess the thought had crossed my mind. Why
don't we discuss it while we soak in the spring.

Naru:  Mutsumi's precedent governs here, you see:  if you ravish one of us,
you have to ravish both of us.

     - - - - -
Narusegawa Mei, Sara McDougall,
   

I knew it! She is the evil descendent of Ron and Harry from Outlaw Star!

 

Hmm... I see it's also romanized as "MacDougal". 
I suppose I might change that, but don't know how the original Japanese 
would
distinguish.

The three emerged from the tunnel into Keitaro's
bedroom.  Keitaro was lying rigid and nude on top of
his futon, eyes glassy, wearing "Mr. Erectronic Mark
10".  Above him stood Suu and Mutsumi, both wearing
spooky white robes with hoods up and nothing on
underneath.  Dozens of white tapering candles had been
placed around the room, the scent of pine lingering in
the air.  The effect was spoiled somewhat by the way
Suu was snickering and Mutsumi giggling.
   

Hmm. 'Bible Black' probably would have gone an entirely different way with
those two in charge. :)

Heh

Mutsumi smiled and clapped.  "I know!  Sit your
brothers and sister down and I'll teach you all a new
game.   It's called 'Todai Promise', and you play it
for the rest of your lives.
 


Hehehehehe. Nice.

This was amusing. I thought it was going to get weak leading into the
'ritual' scene, since the idea in all of them is the same, but it was
sufficiently different to work. Nice little one shot absurdish lime piece. I
approve.

DB Sommer
 

Again, thank you.  Glad you enjoyed it; I certainly enjoyed writing it.




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