Nice enjoyable one shot fic. As I believe someone mentioned before, there
was quite the contrast with how things started and the mood you set to
Gourry's reappeareance. After that, it had a nice mix of mostly humor with
some serious overtones. Even had Naga and Xellos thrown in there. Prose
flowed well, and I didn't catch any grammar errors. The bit with Lina's last
name being reversed was a nice touch as well.

Overall, nice work.

DB Sommer



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