And once again, we cut into the backlog:

LOL. It's not THAT backlogged, DB-san!

Aishuu Offers:
Those Who Lose Dreaming Are Lost
mbsilvana@yahoo.com
Disclaimers: CLAMPCLAMPCLAMPCLAMPCLAMP.

Which is usually enough to make me go 'Ugh!'. Especially X. But
since it's
from you, we'll see

Now if it was Chobits/X....

LOL! I've SEEN a Chobits/X fusion which actually is fairly good.

Thanks for the faith in me... *gurgle*

First person narrative, so grammar and delivery of the information
will be
hard to comment on.

Of course. But if I slip from melodramatic to "gansta" let me know.

Still, I was
there, walking through places that I normally wouldn't
have dared to in the daylight, as though I was asking
for someone to hurt me.

Probably was.

This is CLAMP. They are all either sadists or masochists.

And I wouldn't, I promised myself. But I needed to
stop running towards them when something in my life
went wrong, as it always seemed to do.

It's CLAMP and X. Something always does. :)

HEY! Well, yes, but... ^_~

"Calm down," the voice said softly, and I twitched.
The voice was vaguely familiar in some way, like a
half-remembered dream. "Mitsuki-chan, it's me."

The name and nature of the dreaming had me thinking of Miyuki-chan
in
Wonderland. :)

Ha ha ha. As far as I know, Miyuki is QUITE busy being chased after a
bunch of cute lesbians.

"Hello," he said softly. His voice was deeper than I
remembered.

He's nearing 'X' days, and is grim.

Actually, he's well into them. 

Subaru smelled like cigarettes and sakura, an
intoxicating mix that went straight to my head,

She has odd definitions of intoxicating.

I find incense intoxicating... Always feel slightly light-headed and
drunk.

making

me feel light-headed. His face had refined into
maturity, and I realized that his childhood beauty had
faded away into something more adult, more masculine
and breathtaking.

And Bishonen.

*looks innocent*

Hmm. Moody and depressing, to be sure. 

I'll take that as a compliment. ^_~

Sorry I couldn't be of much

help, but
lack of familiarity hinders anything I could say about
characterizations.

Saaa... the thought is appreciated, though. I need to start writing
some more main-stream stuff again.

~ Aishuu

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If I could change anything
Then I would change everything
These bitter days shall remain

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