Subject: [FFML] Re: [FanFic][LH] Love Hina Kamiza
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 9/26/2003, 7:52 PM
To: "Cheshire Grin" <cheshiregrin@iprimus.com.au>, <ffml@anifics.com>


And yet more LH:


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Love Hina - Kamiza
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'Lord Naoshige said, "The Way of the Samurai is in desperateness. Ten
men or more can not kill such a man.

Unless they are desperate too. Or just talented. :)

 Common sense will not accomplish
great things.

Heh. Reminds of Mari's philosophy in Hale no Guu. "If you don't live in a
fantasy world, you'll never get anything accomplished.'


The void.

Nothingness.

Separated from the world by a raging column of water.

Motoko, from the sounds of it.


Life was inconsequential. Death nothing more than the reach of one's
vision. All that mattered was living and dying well. The void taught
that.

Very educational for a void of nothingness. :)




The false mask of Godhood, the plague of arrogance sweeping through the
world, raping and defiling it and it's

its


* * *

Motoko stepped out from beneath the waterfall. With almost vacant
movements

'vacant movement'? Not sure what that would be

she tore a strip from her sleeve and bound it over eyes
burning in emotionless fury.

And another contradiction here.

Retrieving her sword from it's

its

The nine clan disciples were waiting. Clothed in their traditional
uniforms and wielding naked katanas, they fell on her with soundless
movements from all sides. Only the sudden rush of air betrayed the
blades rushing toward her.

Inconsequential.

In a flurry of sword strikes they dissolved into a spray of liquid and
particles and were washed away by raging water.

I guess so.



With a quick movement, Motoko knelt and removed her blade from the body
of her sister. Though blood seeped from the corner of her mouth, the
fallen woman's eyes remained steady.

That was grim


END

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Author's note:

Just a short one shot that came of reading Hagakure, watching the
Kenshin OVA and Love Hina one after another.

Heh. Yes, that would do it to you.

It worked well enough, though obviously the style isn't the humor LH one.

DB Sommer



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