"DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net> writes:
elisteran wrote:
As Kachiko stared at the books, the text began to blur together,
forming an endless, monotonous chain of words.
Would that happen if she was looking at books, rather than reading one
particular book?
Probably not, but she's looking at them as one evil entity intent on driving
her to boredom.
Hmm... ok. I still don't know that the visual effect would work well
(if this were animated, say), but I can envision it, so it works.
True, although she complained about the loss of apetite in the room. Will
change anyway. Actions oftenttimes speak louder than words.
Yep. (I think that's pretty much the motto for diehard Ranma/Akane
supporters, after all ;-)
"True." Soun admitted. There was no way someone reputed to be as
powerful
and knowledgeable of the martial arts as this mysterious figure could
possibly be so perverted.
I think this attempt at irony didn't work out.
Ah well. You have to figure there was some reason they hooked up with Happi,
despite rumors that had to be around.
True, and I like the concept; I just thought you were laying it on a
little too thick there. Sort of like spreading treacle on toast with
a spade... on top of a the contents of a jar of jelly.
Nice difference in tone between this Soun and the later Soun.
People change over time.
Never! Give me static 2d characters or give me death!
What about Yukari? ;-)
Missing the reference this time.
Way back at the top of this chapter, Genma and Soun are discussing
Soun's last disastrous relationship, with Yukari. (How quickly first
loves are forgotten. Sort of like Rosaline, as she's upstaged by that
tart Juliet in Romeo's affections).