----- Original Message ----- 
From: "David Johnston" <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
To: "David Johnston" <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
Cc: "Nicholas Stone" <bnstone@ix.netcom.com>; <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Wednesday, September 17, 2003 3:55 AM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Ranma] Anijza Part 3: The Escape (Draft)

{Nonsensical.  Cologne tells them she'll have to kill them.
I don't care how sad Akane looks, Nabiki is not going to
agree to die and go to Hell for her.}

There is also the matter that since they have to die to go to hell,
shouldn't somebody like Kasumi or Nabiki or Tofu or anybody be asking the
very first question that comes to mind.  Which is if they die to go to Hell,
can somebody bring them back to life to get them out of Hell?  That would be
the first thing I'd ask, cause I'm not going to do and go to Hell for
anybody, unless I can come back out of it.

And why is Nabiki even going?  She's not a martial artist or super powered
like everbody else, so why is she going?  She's useless in a fight, she
can't do anything to help them other then be another innocent victim to be
protected, so why is she going with them?  Nabiki, Kasumi, Tofu, Cologne,
even Happosai or Genma or Soun should be bringing this up.  So why is she
going.  Course, if this was already explained in a previous piece, then can
you please reitirate it in the story, as it will something that you the
author introduced, and with the way everybody else in the story is acting,
it would be new to them as well, so they can very easily forget it about it
unless reminded.

--CCMax



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