--- Bickham Jourdan <bikkamu@yahoo.co.jp> wrote:

The biggest problem in this
fic is
that.... no matter how he behaves.. Soun is the
father and
head of the household.  Kasumi has no power to tell
him
anything... a) because she's his daughter and b)
even if
she is filling in the wife's household duties, the
wife
still is not so in control.

In most households, perhaps.  The Tendo household is
not most households - which is one of the engines of
comedy in Ranma 1/2.  Soun may have instances of being
strong willed, but especially in fan canon, they are
rare.  I think the scene works, but that's just MO.

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