"I think it's a rather fitting punishment."  Makoto said.  "Martial

Artists

have a responsibility to uphold their own {honor : honour}. and respect

the {honor : honour}. of

those they fight.  Sounds to me like Tao-Ching didn't fight fair."

There's no use fighting fair if you don't win; especially against
opponents like Herb.

Yes, but Tao-Ching took it apon himself to avenge the entire tribe's debt,
and did so without approval.  Makoto's comments are more her interpretation
than reality.

Outside in the hall, the phone rang.  Urd and Mara both looked towards

the

sound.  After a second, there was a knock on the door and Belldandy

peeked

in.  "Um... I have a phone call from Licensing... for a Mara, Goddess,

third

class, probationary."

Mara fainted.

I think she took that very well.  She's going to have to relearn a lot
of her thought processes.  With Urd as sempai, her learning to be a
goddess should be... interesting. :}b

HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE

A flash of light from across the stadium caught Akane's glance, and she
blinked.  "That's funny."

I think what your calling 'stadium' in several places should be
'athletic field' or something similar.

Humm.  probably.  couldn't think what else to call it

The raven haired gymnast landed at Akane's feet.  "What may I do to show

my

adoration for my goddess?"

Go away.  I need to go back and find out why Kodachi is so fixated on
Akane.

Umm.  stripped her bare in public and whipped her to orgasam at her fight?

Shan Pu grinned.  "Even better.  Shan Pu like Melee."

Who's Melee?  I thought Shan Pu only liked Zhu Shu and Akane, and was
learning to like Ranma.

Hummm.  I do hope you're being sarcastic.  Melee is combat with multiple
opponents.  Basic D&D term also used in SCA tournements.

"One more step. and I could have. avenged the squad. and earned a reward
from Ai. and regained our popularity.  I. Ayeka. shall. forever.

regret...

this..."

I'm not sure 'regret' is the intended word in this and the other places
Ayeka used it.  I would have expected her to say something like she'd
never forgive or never give up.

GRIN.  Then you're very obviously missing the reference, and like Domuramu
before you, you shall forever regret this.

"Zhu Shu can FLY!"

Absolutely.  Now I'm wondering if it is a permanent change to her
cursed form or just a side-effect of the Dragon Wine.

Won't know till book three.

hehehehehehehe

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