--- Nidoking <Nidoking042@hotmail.com> wrote:

I know a few people have been eagerly awaiting this, and I will
keep you
in suspense no longer. Davner has been a very good sport about
this, and
everything here is posted with his permission.

 
Not a bad MST, though I'm not sure how well it worked with this
particular source material. A large part of the delight of 
reading MWAL lies in the timing of the jokes, which just come 
tumbling one after the other. Stopping every couple of lines to 
wisecrack disrupts the whole feel and makes it seem like you're 
MSTing a different story. 

Not to say this is a bad MST, because it isn't. 

Brian Welch

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