Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Continuation] Ill, Chapter 1
From: "Michael Roberts" <mikedr@gte.net>
Date: 8/24/2003, 7:40 PM
To: "Lavender Gaia" <lavendergaia@yahoo.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


Chapter 1: What's Wrong With Ranma?

[SNIP]
A/N: Ranma never seems to get sick or hurt (except for one little story
arc), so I had to put this in. But can a disease beat the invincible Ranma
Saotome? Questions, comments, reactions, and C & C are greatly appreciated
to either the ML or lavendergaia@yahoo.com


Interesting start.  Not much to go off of here, but it could bring up some
humorous moments if played right.  Ranma obviously can't go to school.  One
of the Tendos sisters will have to take care of him.  Kasumi - easily done,
and could be turned into a series of misadventures (showing sides of Kasumi
we're never meant to see).  Nabiki - for a price.  Akane - but would the
treatment be worse than the symptoms (this has been done before, but if
pushed, can go in new directions)?  Then the other fiancees would try to
"help".  The rivals would surely want to kick Ranma while he's down.  Still,
there will be a few that genuinely want him to get well, for their own
reasons, of course.  How well will they run interference so Ranma can
recuperate?  This depnds on point of view in order to work, though.

One image that pops up is an apothetic Ranma being lead by an armed escort
(Soun in full Samurai Armor, Kasumi w\frying pan, etc?) to Dr. Tofu's
clinic.

Keep writing...

Michael Roberts



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